Date: 2011-01-25 02:42 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] coriana
I love the -- tactile is the wrong word, but sensory isn't close-in enough -- the tactile/sensory (for lack of a better term) immediacy of it, the experientiality, the close perspective, but I want a pull back to a wider lens toward the end, to a little more context, a tiny bit more of the framework. I'm beginning to know who the best-beloveds are, and something of their urgency and shared experience, but where are they going and why? It's clear you're not aiming for full explanation/exposition, and I'm not saying you should -- I just wish for a few clues more. Just a few.
~ c.
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