script and prose are tools with different effects, and do not turn into each other as seamlessly as might seem. If you don't grab your reader within a couple of minutes, you've got to be pretty sure they've got nothing better to do. Which... well, this is the internet, there's always something to do.
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If you don't grab your reader within a couple of minutes, you've got to be pretty sure they've got nothing better to do. Which... well, this is the internet, there's always something to do.