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[beccaelizabeth]

You know the thing with writing about magic is you never quite know when something is meant to be flowery ways of saying stuff or actually literal.
For example:
'With a grunt and a gasp that was choked off as he stopped breathing, Giles came, fire racing through him and pushing out of his cock in great bursts that wracked his body.'

see, that's *probably* just meant to be metaphor-fire, but part of me wonders if Ethan now needs checking for burns.

Comments

[wisdomeagle]

O_o Hee!

[sparklebutch.livejournal.com]

Ow.