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beccaelizabethToday wasn't very talky. There was Doing Writing. Except I couldn't think of anything so I wasn't very good at it.
I did show the first ten pages of my script to three people. All of them wanted to read the next page. So call that a win.
Also had comments about what other SF it resembled and some useful observations about what I hadn't said early enough and stuff.
So now I need to take out half a dozen lines, rewrite one description, and send the whole thing in email to two people who have email to send it to.
Also, make the whole thing actually good. But that gets easier if people say which bits are not good yet.
tired now.
I like the evenings with talking in more better.
I did show the first ten pages of my script to three people. All of them wanted to read the next page. So call that a win.
Also had comments about what other SF it resembled and some useful observations about what I hadn't said early enough and stuff.
So now I need to take out half a dozen lines, rewrite one description, and send the whole thing in email to two people who have email to send it to.
Also, make the whole thing actually good. But that gets easier if people say which bits are not good yet.
tired now.
I like the evenings with talking in more better.