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Feb. 19th, 2007 07:58 amI figured out yesterday's bunny!
Okay, so we had a tragic predestination paradox, a time travel device that is thoroughly useless because it kills the traveller. And whoever gets thrown forwards knows they go back to die in the crash because it already happened. So I was trying to figure out if I should do that to Owen or Ianto. But then it gets boring because they run around trying not to die and then they die.
Except, not *or*. Have Owen *&* Ianto time jump forwards - and know one of them has to go back and die, because it already happened.
Now we have tension. Conflict. A screwed up mess.
Win!
Of course then the thing is either we make Owen noble and then kill him, we keep Owen selfish and then kill him, we keep Ianto noble and then kill him, or we make Ianto selfish and then kill him. Or we make Owen selfish and kill Ianto, or Ianto noble and then kill Owen.
... is that all the combinations?
ANYways, what I mean is: I like Ianto. I want Ianto to live. I thoroughly dislike Owen and would quite like to blow him up a bit. So if I send Ianto and Owen into a situation where one of them inevitably dies, it comes out as a bit of Owen bashing *even if* I let him live. Or *especially* if. Because we likes Ianto, and if Owen is even indirectly benefitting from Ianto's noble and inevitable demise, we hates him muchly.
And whichever ending is set up it's author fingerprints everywhere. I mean, it's always an author's choice what happens, but sometimes it gets really *obvious*.
So I'm back to 'made of lose' for this plot.
Even if I get the whole team involved then it's still a big clunky ending.
If Jack is one of the candidates then he's the only one with a chance of surviving, so naturally he'd go. Except this time travel stuff is the only thing likely to end him, because he could be time looped or annihilated rather than simply killed, so he's at equal risk to everyone else. Having him walk in all "Hi, did you miss me?" would be... Hmmm, actually, having him walk in *oblivious* and all "Hi!" would be interesting, because then he *Time travelled back* so he could take the kaboom! And then he dies and doesn't die! And he'd know that the kaboom is his tragic and inevitable demise *but* he, being Jack, might have thousands or even hundreds of thousands of years first.
And at the end of all that he gets to come back and spend his last day on Earth with Ianto.
So at some point in the tragic and inevitable future (because Ianto is mortal, so time's winged chariot is just as much a crash crash as a dying train) after Ianto dies, Jack will have saved up that one last day, and he can visit it any time he wants.
With that probable certain death afterwards.
And knowing it really is the *last* day either way.
oooooh... suddenly I like it! We get all the angst, the tension, the big choice, the arguments, and then we get all that at the end! And it isn't a magic out, it isn't saying 'oops, not inevitable after all!'
And it makes Jack mortal, but in a really specific way.
*And* it leaves a possibility of massively buggering up spacetime if he dies in any *other* way, so suddenly he'll have to be a bit careful about that.
Joy!
It only really works if it's a Jack comes back after season 1 story as well, yesno? Because otherwise he'd not be oblivious?
But he could have just wandered off to somewhere geographic and then wandered in while he knows he's away. That would mean the Doctor wouldn't be in any way involved, and wouldn't be turning up ready to magic things better. I really like to avoid the magic Doctor endings.
I think this plot has become worky.
'Cure' Jack of his immortality the hard way - make there be a limit because he knows he's already dead!
Nifty!
Okay, so we had a tragic predestination paradox, a time travel device that is thoroughly useless because it kills the traveller. And whoever gets thrown forwards knows they go back to die in the crash because it already happened. So I was trying to figure out if I should do that to Owen or Ianto. But then it gets boring because they run around trying not to die and then they die.
Except, not *or*. Have Owen *&* Ianto time jump forwards - and know one of them has to go back and die, because it already happened.
Now we have tension. Conflict. A screwed up mess.
Win!
Of course then the thing is either we make Owen noble and then kill him, we keep Owen selfish and then kill him, we keep Ianto noble and then kill him, or we make Ianto selfish and then kill him. Or we make Owen selfish and kill Ianto, or Ianto noble and then kill Owen.
... is that all the combinations?
ANYways, what I mean is: I like Ianto. I want Ianto to live. I thoroughly dislike Owen and would quite like to blow him up a bit. So if I send Ianto and Owen into a situation where one of them inevitably dies, it comes out as a bit of Owen bashing *even if* I let him live. Or *especially* if. Because we likes Ianto, and if Owen is even indirectly benefitting from Ianto's noble and inevitable demise, we hates him muchly.
And whichever ending is set up it's author fingerprints everywhere. I mean, it's always an author's choice what happens, but sometimes it gets really *obvious*.
So I'm back to 'made of lose' for this plot.
Even if I get the whole team involved then it's still a big clunky ending.
If Jack is one of the candidates then he's the only one with a chance of surviving, so naturally he'd go. Except this time travel stuff is the only thing likely to end him, because he could be time looped or annihilated rather than simply killed, so he's at equal risk to everyone else. Having him walk in all "Hi, did you miss me?" would be... Hmmm, actually, having him walk in *oblivious* and all "Hi!" would be interesting, because then he *Time travelled back* so he could take the kaboom! And then he dies and doesn't die! And he'd know that the kaboom is his tragic and inevitable demise *but* he, being Jack, might have thousands or even hundreds of thousands of years first.
And at the end of all that he gets to come back and spend his last day on Earth with Ianto.
So at some point in the tragic and inevitable future (because Ianto is mortal, so time's winged chariot is just as much a crash crash as a dying train) after Ianto dies, Jack will have saved up that one last day, and he can visit it any time he wants.
With that probable certain death afterwards.
And knowing it really is the *last* day either way.
oooooh... suddenly I like it! We get all the angst, the tension, the big choice, the arguments, and then we get all that at the end! And it isn't a magic out, it isn't saying 'oops, not inevitable after all!'
And it makes Jack mortal, but in a really specific way.
*And* it leaves a possibility of massively buggering up spacetime if he dies in any *other* way, so suddenly he'll have to be a bit careful about that.
Joy!
It only really works if it's a Jack comes back after season 1 story as well, yesno? Because otherwise he'd not be oblivious?
But he could have just wandered off to somewhere geographic and then wandered in while he knows he's away. That would mean the Doctor wouldn't be in any way involved, and wouldn't be turning up ready to magic things better. I really like to avoid the magic Doctor endings.
I think this plot has become worky.
'Cure' Jack of his immortality the hard way - make there be a limit because he knows he's already dead!
Nifty!