Torchwood Fallout
Feb. 23rd, 2024 10:21 pmRead by Tom Price and featuring Andy Davidson, this one has a solid mission statement, that Torchwood is gone and the regular people are left coping with the fallout.
But it kind of didnt work for me. Like, it was not, in fact, fallout from Torchwood's actions that kicked off the first half of the story, or even specifically the rift. And the second half was... ( Read more... )
It wasnt very satisfying. I'd keep a lot of the people bits but swap out everything after they left Cardiff I think.
But it wasnt like it was bad either. Just... left me with that niggly rewrite feeling.
But it kind of didnt work for me. Like, it was not, in fact, fallout from Torchwood's actions that kicked off the first half of the story, or even specifically the rift. And the second half was... ( Read more... )
It wasnt very satisfying. I'd keep a lot of the people bits but swap out everything after they left Cardiff I think.
But it wasnt like it was bad either. Just... left me with that niggly rewrite feeling.