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Apr. 11th, 2015 01:55 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
beccaelizabethThis author seems utterly unaware of what parts they're building up to and suggesting the story is in fact about.
Because whenever one of them arrives, every time, there's a short conversation about the fact it's coming up (couple of paragraphs short) and then we skip to at least a week after.
Even the sex scenes are about a paragraph each. Why even make the story explicit for about a paragraph at a time? And it makes their sex life seem more perfunctory than their going out drinking, since that invariably takes longer.
... why am I still reading this?
Because whenever one of them arrives, every time, there's a short conversation about the fact it's coming up (couple of paragraphs short) and then we skip to at least a week after.
Even the sex scenes are about a paragraph each. Why even make the story explicit for about a paragraph at a time? And it makes their sex life seem more perfunctory than their going out drinking, since that invariably takes longer.
... why am I still reading this?