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Jan. 11th, 2018 07:41 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
beccaelizabethI may have a Plot for the Dana book
like, not just the relationship stuff, the specific reason to run around the landscape having Adventure.
Dana is trying to be impressive to someone who can't go home because magic crit fail made big problem.
Dana shall go and try and fix the magic problem
because has some knowings I already established and they seem relevant.
Tries to be Very Impressive, fails to impress target, impresses future husband instead.
Pretty good plot, changes world conditions such that next book becomes possible, does a bit of a tour of the world and how magic works to get there.
Next I need this plot to be in specific sections with scenes and all, but, this is good start.
like, not just the relationship stuff, the specific reason to run around the landscape having Adventure.
Dana is trying to be impressive to someone who can't go home because magic crit fail made big problem.
Dana shall go and try and fix the magic problem
because has some knowings I already established and they seem relevant.
Tries to be Very Impressive, fails to impress target, impresses future husband instead.
Pretty good plot, changes world conditions such that next book becomes possible, does a bit of a tour of the world and how magic works to get there.
Next I need this plot to be in specific sections with scenes and all, but, this is good start.