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May. 13th, 2018 06:11 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
beccaelizabethI'm kind of bored of fic that only persuades the reader the couple would have really great sex together.
I mean there's so many stories that say they're in love but then devote precisely zero pages to explaining what it is about spending time together they like, except the sex.
I'm not really seeking out specific characters only to read up on the appeal of their cock.
I kind of want to see how they fit their lives together? What it is about each other that makes them happy? Maybe why they feel they can be better people together?
I mean at the moment with my usual reading habits it keeps being 'okay we tried to kill each other, possibly a lot, but, sex'.
I mean I can see that's a motivating force in many lives, but it's not exactly a very varied one, so I feel like I've read the story before.
And then it's boring.
It also doesn't make me think good thoughts about the guys if their intractable political differences are suddenly irrelevant because cock.
I mean, they had a calling, they were a bit busy with the heroics and stuff, there was stuff that mattered that we were reading about
and in this story
none of it matters, because sex.
Boring!
Try writing about specific individuals.
I mean there's so many stories that say they're in love but then devote precisely zero pages to explaining what it is about spending time together they like, except the sex.
I'm not really seeking out specific characters only to read up on the appeal of their cock.
I kind of want to see how they fit their lives together? What it is about each other that makes them happy? Maybe why they feel they can be better people together?
I mean at the moment with my usual reading habits it keeps being 'okay we tried to kill each other, possibly a lot, but, sex'.
I mean I can see that's a motivating force in many lives, but it's not exactly a very varied one, so I feel like I've read the story before.
And then it's boring.
It also doesn't make me think good thoughts about the guys if their intractable political differences are suddenly irrelevant because cock.
I mean, they had a calling, they were a bit busy with the heroics and stuff, there was stuff that mattered that we were reading about
and in this story
none of it matters, because sex.
Boring!
Try writing about specific individuals.
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Date: 2018-05-15 11:23 am (UTC)but no yeah I see what you mean and agree for most cases