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Apr. 24th, 2006 11:45 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
beccaelizabethI've been going through the fic fiddling with the dialogue punctuation. Also noticing a couple things needed tweaking. Had one knife too many, and didn't repeat a word I'd meant to make themey. Stuff like that. So, fic is not 23456 words any more. Has about an extra 20 words instead. I sulk, and consider trimming it back again :eyeroll:
Of course I have to decide if the titles count, and I'm still only up to act 3... actually there was just another act break. I think its act 3 on the outline but I haven't really pinned down where the act breaks go. They're all *** *** *** ??? at the minute, some of them within 3 lines of each other because I can't decide which is the precisely right moment.
Computer says critical battery warning at 11%, so on the charger it is again.
I could get lunch or something.
*wanders off looking vague*
Of course I have to decide if the titles count, and I'm still only up to act 3... actually there was just another act break. I think its act 3 on the outline but I haven't really pinned down where the act breaks go. They're all *** *** *** ??? at the minute, some of them within 3 lines of each other because I can't decide which is the precisely right moment.
Computer says critical battery warning at 11%, so on the charger it is again.
I could get lunch or something.
*wanders off looking vague*