2-12 Fragments family edits
Apr. 3rd, 2008 07:47 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
beccaelizabethWatched 2-12 checking for edits. None for language, some for gore and violence.
No close up of the stomach wound, just a quick bottle pull out.
Was there a cut in fish head go boom or did my TV blink?
Not noticing cuts in the blood soaked deadness. Her stomach wound? Is that then or later?
Later, but it’s definitely gone. No closeup of her stomach.
Face blood spatter still there.
“It clears pretty quickly” is missing because that’s when you see her brain being squirmy.
They cut from “you could have saved her” To “I couldn’t” and missed out the whole Owen beats crap out of Jack and strangles him part.
No close up of the stomach wound, just a quick bottle pull out.
Was there a cut in fish head go boom or did my TV blink?
Not noticing cuts in the blood soaked deadness. Her stomach wound? Is that then or later?
Later, but it’s definitely gone. No closeup of her stomach.
Face blood spatter still there.
“It clears pretty quickly” is missing because that’s when you see her brain being squirmy.
They cut from “you could have saved her” To “I couldn’t” and missed out the whole Owen beats crap out of Jack and strangles him part.